Poem: Sunshine Rain

Melting sweat
Underneath a Victorian umbrella
Patrons at ice-cream parlour
Come and go as they wish
Tango in the lightning rain
Sunray drying the daylight dew
We started the ball rolling
Press not the stop button
Sprinkling blissfulness in the pastoral
The shower of blessing is within you and me

2 thoughts on “Poem: Sunshine Rain

  1. Eileen黃愛玲 October 24, 2013 at 10:01 am Reply

    The image I have of this poem is vivid.
    “The shower of blessing is within you and me.”
    “Underneath a Victorian umbrella.”
    I am really liking the details here.

    • Deborah Wong October 24, 2013 at 11:57 pm Reply

      Thanks Eileen. I wrote that at 3pm, while sipping on an iced HK coffee. The weather outside was windy, but killer sun. The feel of melting ice-cream slipped in…

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